Once upon a time there was a young fellow named Drew. Drew was a happy little lad. He would hop around the city singing, but one day Drew noticed something. He looked in a dictionary and saw a word that he had never seen before… Rap- a new type of music style. Drew then studied up on rap until he understood what it was. Nobody else in the small city knew anything about Rap. Drew then had to spread the word.
At the next annual talent show, Drew entered and sang to his beloved beat in his new style of rap. Everyone loved Drew had invented the new style called Rap. Drew has saved the world from it's old 80's rock and bad country.
I like the storyline you chose for this short story. I'm wondering if it's possible to develop the story a bit more so that the reader has a better understanding of what the whole thing is about, the type of people the character's are, etc.
ReplyDeleteHa i liked the ending, is this referring to drew b.?
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