Thursday, December 9, 2010

Pewaukee varsity basketball

My older brother Nick plays basketball, he practices with the varsity but usually plays on JV. A lot of Nick's friends talk to me a lot like David Girmschied, Jordy, and so on. Some of my dreams is to play on Firday's on the varsity team because of the game of basketball and the pleasure of making varsity. I know a lot of them as they know me and it would be really fun to do the same being a varsity player then talking to the younger kids.

3 comments:

  1. I liked your story but your sentance fluency could have been better.

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  2. I think that you need to re post this piece with some corrections.

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